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POEMS...I wrote more than a few years back.

February 12, 2008

The names of the poems are.... Unspoken Words, and the other is ... Is this wasted time? Tell me what you think... good or bad :o)

Is This Wasted Time ?

A wife's struggle to feel truely loved and needed

Wedding rings apon our fingers, situations worsen as my pain lingers. You say you love me, but you lie. You treat me badly, make me cry. Why do you say the things you do? It must make you happy, but I am through. All I wanted was a little romance, Now I struggle just for acceptance. Our child feels there's something wrong, mommy and daddy should get along. I'm always trying yet never succeed, put your child first instead of your own greed. Does all this mean that we should go? Confusion overwhelms me, I do not know. Leaving you for someone is my greatest fear, Look at me when I talk to you, I'm over here. Show us you love us, show us you care, Take us to the park, a walk, or anywhere. Look at it this way, love is an uphill climb, if your not up for the challange, our love is just WASTED TIME.

Unspoken Words

I'm expressing my love for my dad...

Unspoken words but I know you do care, when I need you most you're always there. Remember when we'd spend time together; I was young then, it feels like forever. We would go fishing, that was always fun, though you always caught the biggest one. Sometimes you're angry, you yell and scream, I know it's a disguise, you're not that mean. You will always be my daddy and I your li'l girl; if I could do it, I would give you the world. Your life has been rough as time draws near, I love you, Dad, just making things clear. I can't ever express the way that I'm feeling, I'm telling you on paper just for that reason. What will I do when you are no longer here? When I think of it, my eyes swell with tears. I know all that meanness was all a disguise, when you look at us kids I see love in those eyes.

Copyright ©2008 Tawny Pipit


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    • Photo of DalanJe DalanJe
      DalanJe
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      My Grandchild Is A GIRL!!!!!!!!
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      Posted 6 months ago by DalanJe

      Sorry it took me so long to get to read these. I wanted to wait til I could pay close attention and Yesterday was just not going to be that day. Lotsa kids stuff was going on so I needed to concentrate just to keep straight who was going where and when. I like the poetry. Thanks for sharing a little bit of it with us.

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      love is what we came here for, do you know what I mean? have your eyes really seen?
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      Posted 6 months ago by mindofpatience

      Tawny, I love them, you really write well and you know how to express your feelings, somehow it all ties together on each one, you could submit them to a poetry contest. In college I took a poetry writing class, and it was fun, I am sorry, did your marriage work out?? Is you Daddy still alive?? Mine died when I was 17, then my Momma died two years ago, well, Thank you for sharing, Jess